I really appreciate writers who write outside their racial experience or sexual orientation. For one thing, there are many more white writers being published these days than writers of color, and if white writers can contribute to increasing the representation of people of color in the book market, I’m all for it. Second, I believe part of a writer’s job is to write about people who are different from her. I think it’s important that we do that. That we seek to tell stories that challenge us as writers on many levels — whether in characters or in plot or in style. Otherwise, we don’t grow as writers; we become mired in stories we’ve retold so many times they wear a groove in the stairs of our imaginations. I think that in order to truly fly, writers must do things that can cause us to crash and burn.

But I understand why writers are hesitant to write about characters who don’t share their race or sexual orientation. Cultural appropriation is real, and many of the guest posts about white/straight writers doing their research and attempting to get to the heart of their characters are, I think, sincere efforts to avoid cultural appropriation. I applaud that awareness, because I’ve read books that have been insanely popular, but have turned me off completely because they felt so much like cultural appropriation.
#Malinda lo #unsolicited writing advice

cactuartamer:

musings-of-a-weird-kid:

I’ve been thinking about this for a while.  And I thought that Judy Berman from The Atlantic stated the issue really well in regards to “casual racism” in popular media.

I have to say, I really think that people overplay the difficulty of these situations in general in order to get out of changing their behavior. After all, if either thing is going to get you criticized then why bother even trying to do the right thing?We hear this kind of thing all the time with regards to whitewashed art and technical difficulties… supposedly, brown skin is just too much of an artistic challenge for some people, or the palette doesn’t work or lighting is hard or whatever the excuse of the day is.
Or with cosplay and race-face makeup… supposedly people will get on your case for cosplaying PoC while white anyway, so why not raceface ( and boy is that entire thing bullshit, but that is a rant unto itself, so…)
And when it comes to including PoC in your stories or art at all, the supposed tightrope over a chasm of SJ disapproval that we are asking people to walk is actually more of a comfortably wide stone bridge with a sturdy parapet, and I for one don’t understand why people continually insist on flinging themselves off of it into the void. 
To take a concrete example of something that’s depressingly common, say you wanted to do a piece of art with an Native PoC in in? If the only thing you can think of is to draw a girl in a war bonnet with a wolf and eagle superimposed in the sky at 50% opacity, then, quite frankly, that’s a personal problem, and it’s one you really need to fix, but doesn’t actually have any bearing on how easy it would be to make something that wasn’t a trite misrepresentation. 
I mean, maybe this wasn’t what OP had in mind but tbh I’m having a hard time imagining a situation where it would actually be difficult to not draw an appropriative picture or a misrepresentation. 

Statements like these generate sympathy for white writers without sparing much empathy for people of color who remain underrepresented in media.

It’s basically suggesting there are only two ways out of the problem of underrepresentation and saying: “What can I do?  If I do it badly people will criticize me!” —a sentiment that had never stopped anyone from writing poorly formed white characters.

Besides, if you do the work—yes, writing complex characters is hard work—and perhaps collaborate with people who do know how to write characters of color (such as the writers of color that only make up 6% of television show writing staffs)  then maybe you can miraculously avoid “appropriating or misrepresenting.”

White writers who can’t write characters of color well are not the victims here.  There are plenty of white writers who have successfully written characters of color, because they proactively choose to do the work.   Imagination is an essential ability in  successful writers.  Writers who can’t find it in themselves to “imagine a way forward” are missing a key skill.

cactuartamer:

musings-of-a-weird-kid:

I’ve been thinking about this for a while.  And I thought that Judy Berman from The Atlantic stated the issue really well in regards to “casual racism” in popular media.

I have to say, I really think that people overplay the difficulty of these situations in general in order to get out of changing their behavior. After all, if either thing is going to get you criticized then why bother even trying to do the right thing?

We hear this kind of thing all the time with regards to whitewashed art and technical difficulties… supposedly, brown skin is just too much of an artistic challenge for some people, or the palette doesn’t work or lighting is hard or whatever the excuse of the day is.

Or with cosplay and race-face makeup… supposedly people will get on your case for cosplaying PoC while white anyway, so why not raceface ( and boy is that entire thing bullshit, but that is a rant unto itself, so…)

And when it comes to including PoC in your stories or art at all, the supposed tightrope over a chasm of SJ disapproval that we are asking people to walk is actually more of a comfortably wide stone bridge with a sturdy parapet, and I for one don’t understand why people continually insist on flinging themselves off of it into the void.

To take a concrete example of something that’s depressingly common, say you wanted to do a piece of art with an Native PoC in in? If the only thing you can think of is to draw a girl in a war bonnet with a wolf and eagle superimposed in the sky at 50% opacity, then, quite frankly, that’s a personal problem, and it’s one you really need to fix, but doesn’t actually have any bearing on how easy it would be to make something that wasn’t a trite misrepresentation.

I mean, maybe this wasn’t what OP had in mind but tbh I’m having a hard time imagining a situation where it would actually be difficult to not draw an appropriative picture or a misrepresentation.

Statements like these generate sympathy for white writers without sparing much empathy for people of color who remain underrepresented in media.

It’s basically suggesting there are only two ways out of the problem of underrepresentation and saying: “What can I do? If I do it badly people will criticize me!” —a sentiment that had never stopped anyone from writing poorly formed white characters.

Besides, if you do the work—yes, writing complex characters is hard work—and perhaps collaborate with people who do know how to write characters of color (such as the writers of color that only make up 6% of television show writing staffs) then maybe you can miraculously avoid “appropriating or misrepresenting.”

White writers who can’t write characters of color well are not the victims here. There are plenty of white writers who have successfully written characters of color, because they proactively choose to do the work. Imagination is an essential ability in successful writers. Writers who can’t find it in themselves to “imagine a way forward” are missing a key skill.

#Girls #Unsolicited writing advice

Q
I'm in a Creative Writing (Short Fiction) class, and recently we read a story dealing with discrimination against African-Americans. A (white) classmate of mine asked why we never read stories in school where whites are discriminated against. The teacher didn't have time to respond, but the question stuck in my mind. How would you guys respond to a question like this?
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I was a Creative Writing major when I was in undergrad.   I’m not sure how your program is set up, but I’m kind of wondering:  through the course of your short fiction classes, how many of the short stories did you read were about white people?   How many of the short stories did you read were about people of color?  

Discrimination—namely, racial discrimination—plays a huge part in African American history and in the history of other racial “minority” groups in the United States.   It also plays a big part in influencing today’s racial realities.   Because racism insidiously  subtly, and directly affects the lives of people from these communities, it’s not surprising that discrimination shows up as a theme in short fiction about them.  

Likewise, there are short stories with characters that are women or characters that are gay (and these characters might very well be white) that explore what impact sexism and hetereosexism have on those characters’ lives.

Let’s be frank—systemic discrimination doesn’t affect people who are white in the United States the same way it affects people of color.   Also, short stories about people who are white may not be as fixated on themes of racial oppression or oppression in general because characters and stories about white people are allowed to explore broader themes.

“Why don’t we read about stories where whites are discriminated against?” is one question.

A better question would be:  ”Why do we read about stories where people of color are discriminated against?”

#unsolicited writing advice

watermeloncholy:

fauxkaren:

This comment on Fandom Secrets rn…

I totally feel you on that. Male characters get interesting and nuanced characterization, with quirks and differences from each other. Female characters are frequently just “the chick.” It’s rare for me to find female characters I really like because so many of them are bland and interchangeable.

Idk. Maybe the commenter and I are watching SUPER different things, but there are plenty of well written female characters out there.

IDK.

LET’S CHAT ABOUT THIS, FOLLOWERS.

Do you think that female characters are frequently bland and just “the chick”? Can you think of specific examples of show where this is true?

Because where I’m sitting, the shows that I watch have fairly complex and varied female characters. But then maybe I’m watching different things from everyone else.

This sentiment bothers me for a couple reasons.

I do think that there is some truth to this idea that there are more well-developed male characters, not because female characters never get great characterisation, but because there are more (as in a larger quantity of) popular male characters in general.

There are great male characters and mediocre male characters and everything in between. It’s the same deal with female characters, except there’s a smaller pool. This is because female authors still aren’t getting their due and because there’s this perpetual cycle where because women were never allowed to occupy the same spaces/jobs as men and men typically only wrote about men, many of the most celebrated novels are about men and celebrated characters in literature are men. So all of us grow up with this mentality that men are easier to write or more interesting to write about, when that’s not true at all.

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#Gender #Unsolicited writing advice

Criticisms about representations of gender (or race and other diversity) are often countered in fandom by sociological or scientific analyses attempting to explain why the inequality happens according to the internal logic of the fictional world. As though there is any real reason that anything happens in a story except that someone chose to write it that way.

Fiction is not Darwinian: It contains no impartial process of evolution that dispassionately produces the events of a fictional universe. Fiction is miraculously, fundamentally Creationist. When we make worlds, we become gods. And gods are responsible for the things they create, particularly when they create them in their own image.

Laura Hudson writes about the shotage of women characters in Star Wars fore Wired.com in her article “Leia is not enough:  Star Wars and the woman problem in Hollywood.”

“Science fiction in particular has always offered a vision of the world not myopically limited by the world as it exists, but liberated by the power of imagination. Perhaps more than any genre of storytelling, it has no excuse to exclude women for so-called practical reasons — especially when it has every reason to imagine a world where they are just as heroic, exceptional, and well-represented as men.”

#star wars #gender #women #unsolicited writing advice #Lack of diversity is a choice

Come on, y’all…if you write a story and set it in a place like Broaddus’ Indianapolis, Chicago, Atlanta, London, or Las Vegas, basic demographic research will indicate the presence of people of color. To read and enjoy Urban Fantasy, I am expected to just accept that Black people don’t exist? You get the side-eye for that one.

Whether or not you like Urban Fantasy, the fact of the matter is that this subgenre of Fantasy has had an immense and global impact on people through literature, television and film.

It is because of this impact that we cannot ignore the messages that Urban Fantasy brings. Each time an author of this subgenre decides to tell a story, instead of working so hard to erase people of color out of existence, they should work just as hard to erase the problems that plague our society. And fanboys…do not say that writers should not have to be political; that they should be free to write merely to entertain. Every statement we make is political. Every sentence we write is potentially life-changing for someone. Such is the power of the word.

You cannot truly change culture without literature. We can pass a thousand laws saying that racism and sexism are wrong. We can make a thousand impassioned speeches to rouse the marginalized masses; but if everyone returns home after those speeches and sits down to read the latest installment of Twilight, or watch the next episode of The Vampire Diaries and their fictional worlds in which those same marginalized masses barely even exist – then how much change can truly be affected?

It is within the pages of books and under the light of the TV screen where we will reach people and change the world for the better…or worse.

Over and over again, we are told that our stories aren’t worth being told. We do not get to be the heroes. We are never “the one destined to come since man was young upon the earth”. If we are lucky, we get to be the “magical negro”; the “noble savage”; the sidekick; the Black person who doesn’t die in the first ten minutes of the film.

This is damaging to the psyches of people of color. And a devastating blow to the self-esteem of our babies.

So, don’t tell me writers just write to merely entertain, when entertainment has such a powerful, deep and lasting impression on the minds of us all.

#unsolicited writing advice

PSA: Your Default Narrative Settings Are Not Apolitical

fozmeadows:

Victorian Women SmokingImage taken from tumblr.

Recently, SFF author Tansy Rayner Roberts wrote an excellent post debunking the idea that women did nothing interesting or useful throughout history, and that trying to write fictional stories based on this premise of feminine insignificance is therefore both inaccurate and offensive. To quote:

“History is not a long series of centuries in which men did all the interesting/important things and women stayed home and twiddled their thumbs in between pushing out babies, making soup and dying in childbirth.

History is actually a long series of centuries of men writing down what they thought was important and interesting, and FORGETTING TO WRITE ABOUT WOMEN. It’s also a long series of centuries of women’s work and women’s writing being actively denigrated by men. Writings were destroyed, contributions were downplayed, and women were actively oppressed against, absolutely.

But the forgetting part is vitally important. Most historians and other writers of what we now consider “primary sources” simply didn’t think about women and their contribution to society. They took it for granted, except when that contribution or its lack directly affected men.

This does not in any way mean that the female contribution to society was in fact less interesting or important, or complicated, simply that history—the process of writing down and preserving of the facts, not the facts/events themselves—was looking the other way.”

The relevance of this statement to the creation of SFF stories cannot be understated. Time and again, we see fans and creators alike defending the primacy of homogeneous – which is to say, overwhelmingly white, straight and male – stories on the grounds that anything else would be intrinsically unrealistic. Contrary to how it might seem at first blush, this is not a wholly ironic complaint: as I’ve recently had cause to explain elsewhere, the plausibility of SFF stories is derived in large part from their ability to make the impossible feel realistic. A fictional city might be powered by magic and the dreams of dead gods, but it still has to read like a viable human space and be populated by viable human characters. In that sense, it’s arguable that SFF stories actually place a greater primacy on realism than straight fiction, because they have to work harder to compensate for the inclusion of obvious falsehoods. Which is why there’s such an integral relationship between history and fantasy: our knowledge of the former frequently underpins our acceptance of the latter. Once upon a time, we know, there really were knights and castles and quests, and maps whose blank spaces warned of dragons and magic. That being so, a medieval fantasy novel only needs to convince us that the old myths were true; that wizards and witches existed, and that monsters really did populate the wilds. Everything else that’s dissonant with modern reality – the clothes, the customs, the social structure – must therefore constitute a species of historical accuracy, albeit one that’s liberally seasoned with poetic license, because that vague, historical blueprint is what we already have in our heads.

But what happens when our perception of historical accuracy is entirely at odds with real historical accuracy? What happens when we mistake our own limited understanding of culture – or even our personal biases – for universal truths? What happens, in other words, when we’re jerked out of a story, not because the fantastic elements don’t make sense, but because the social/political elements strike us as being implausible on the grounds of unfamiliarity?

The answer tends to be as ugly as it is revealing: that it’s impossible for black, female pirates to exist anywhere, thatpixies and shapeshifters are inherently more plausible as a concept than female action heroes who don’t get raped, and that fairy tale characters as diverse as Mulan, Snow White and Captain Hook can all live together in the modern world regardless of history and canon, but a black Lancelot in the same setting is grossly unrealistic. On such occasions, the recent observation of Pulitzer Prize-winning author Junot Diaz that “Motherfuckers will read a book that’s 1/3rd elvish, but put two sentences in Spanish and they (white people) think we’re taking over” is bitingly, lamentably accurate. And it’s all thanks to a potent blend of prejudice and ignorance: prejudice here meaning the conviction that deliberately including POC, female and/or LGBTQ characters can only ever be a political action (and therefore an inherently suspicious one), and ignorance here meaning the conviction that the historical pervasiveness of sexism, racism and homophobia must necessarily mean that any character shown to surpass these limitations is inherently unrealistic.

Let’s start with the latter claim, shall we?

Because as Roberts rightly points out, there’s a significant difference between history as written and history as happened, with a further dissonance between both those states and history as it’s popularly perceived. For instance: female pirates – and, indeed, female pirates of colour – are very much an historical reality. The formidable Ching Shih, a former prostitute, commanded more than 1800 ships and 80,000 pirates, took on the British empire and was successful enough to eventually retire. There were female Muslim pirates and female Irish pirates – female pirates, in fact, from any number of places, times and backgrounds. But because their existence isn’t routinely taught or acknowledged, we assume them to be impossible. The history of women in the sciences is plagued by similar misconceptions, their vital contributions belittled, forgotten and otherwise elided for so many years that even now, the majority of them continue to be overlooked. Ada Lovelace and Marie Curie are far from being exceptions to the rule: Cecilia Payne-GaposchkinLeise Meitner and Emmy Noether all contributed greatly to our understanding of science, as did countless others. And in the modern day, young female scientists abound despite the ongoing belief in their rarity: nineteen-year-old Aisha Mustafa has patented a new propulsion system for spacecraft, while a young group of Nigerian schoolgirls recently invented a urine-powered generator. Even the world’s first chemist was a woman.

And nor is female achievement restricted to the sciences. Heloise d’Argenteuil was accounted one of the brightest intellectuals of her day; Bessie Coleman was both the first black female flyer and the first African American to hold an international pilot’s licence; Nellie Bly was a famed investigative journalist, not only travelling around the world solo in record time (in which adventure she raced against and beat another female reporter, Elizabeth Bisland), but uncovering the deplorable treatment of inmates at Blackwell Asylum by going undercover as a patient. Sarah Josephine Baker was a famous physician known for tracking down Typhoid Mary, tirelessly fighting poverty and, as a consequence, drastically improving newborn care. And in the modern day, there’s no shortage of female icons out fighting racism, sexism, homophobia and injustice despite the limitations society wants to impose on them: journalistMarie Colvin, who died this year reporting on the Syrian uprising; Burmese politician and activist Aung San Suu Kyi, who spent some 15 years as a political prisoner; fifteen-year-old Malala Yousafzai, who survived an assassination attempt by the Taliban for her advocacy of female education; and Ellen Johnson Sirleaf, Leymah Gbowee and Tawakul Karman, who jointly won last year’s Nobel Peace Prize for their work in support of women’s rights.

But what about historical women in positions of leadership – warriors, politicians, powerbrokers? Where do they fit in?  The ancient world provides any number of well-known examples – Agrippina the YoungerCleopatraBoudica,Queen Bilquis of ShebaNefertiti – but they, too, are far from being unusual: alongside the myriad female soldiersthroughout history who disguised themselves as men stand the Dahomey Amazons, the Soviet Night Witches, thefemale cowboys of the American west and the modern Asgarda of Ukraine; the Empress Dowager CixiQueen Elizabeth I and Ka’iulani all ruled despite opposition, while a wealth of African queens, female rulers and rebels have had their histories virtually expunged from common knowledge. At just twenty years old, Juana Galan successfully lead the women of her village against Napoleon’s troops, an action which ultimately caused the French to abandon her home province of La Mancha. Women played a major part in the Mexican revolution, too, much like modern women across Africa and the Middle East, while the Irish revolutionary, suffragette and politician Constance Markievicz, when asked to provide other women with fashion advice, famously replied that they should “Dress suitably in short skirts and strong boots, leave your jewels in the bank, and buy a revolver.” More recently still, in WWII, New Zealander Nancy Wake served as a leading French resistance fighter: known to the Gestapo as the White Mouse, she once killed an SS sentry with her bare hands and took command of a maquis unit when their male commander died in battle. Elsewhere during the same conflict, Irena Sendler survived both torture and a Nazi death sentence to smuggle some 2,500 Jewish children safely out of the Warsaw ghetto, for which she was nominated for a Nobel peace prize in 2007.

And what of gender roles and sexual orientation – the various social, romantic and matrimonial mores we so frequently assume to be static, innate and immutable despite the wealth of information across biology and history telling us the opposite? Consider the modern matriarchy of Meghalaya, where power and property descend through matrilineal lines and men are the suffragettes. Consider the longstanding Afghan practice of Bacha Posh, where girl children are raised as boys, or the sworn virgins of Albania – women who live as and are legally considered to be men, provided they remain chaste. Consider the honoured status of Winkte and two-spirit persons in various First Nations cultures, and the historical acceptance of both the Fa’afafine of Samoa and the Hijra of India and South-East Asia. Consider the Biblical relationship described in the Book of Samuel between David and Jonathan of Israel, the inferred romance between Alexander the Great and Hephaestion, and the openly gay emperors of the Han Dynasty - including Emperor Ai of Han, whose relationship with Dong Xian gave rise to the phrase ‘the passion of the cut sleeve’. Consider the poetry of Sappho, the relationship between Alice B. Toklas and Gertrude Stein, the tradition of normative, female-female relationships in Basotho, and the role of the Magnonmaka in Mali – nuptial advisers whose teach women how to embrace and enjoy their sexuality in marriage.

And then there’s the twin, misguided beliefs that Europe was both wholly white and just as racially prejudiced as modern society from antiquity through to the Middle Ages – practically right up until the present day. Never mind that no less than three Arthurian Knights of the Round Table – Sir Palamedes, Sir Safir and Sir Segwarides – are canonically stated to be Middle Eastern, or the fact that people of African descent have been present in Europe since classical times; and not just as slaves or soldiers, but as aristocrats. The network of trade routes known collectively asthe Silk Road that linked Europe with parts Africa, the Middle East, India and Asia were established as early as 100 BC; later, black Africans had a visible, significant, complex presence in Europe during the Renaissance, while much classic Greek and Roman literature was only preserved thanks to the dedication of Arabic scholars during the Abbasid Caliphate, also known as the Islamic Golden Age, whose intellectuals were also responsible for many advances in medicine, science and mathematics subsequently appropriated and claimed as Western innovations. Even in the eighteen and nineteen hundreds, it’s possible to find examples of prominent POC in Europe: Alexandre Dumas, author of The Three Musketeers and The Count of Monte Cristo, was of Creole descent, as was Samuel Coleridge-Taylor, the famous British composer, while Jamaican nurse Mary Seacole was honoured alongside Florence Nightingale for her work during the Crimean War.

I could go on. As exhaustive as this information might seem, it barely scratches the surface. But as limited an overview as these paragraphs present, they should still be sufficient to make one very simple point: that even in highly prejudicial settings supposedly based on real human societies, trying to to argue that women, POC and/or LGBTQ persons can’t so much as wield even small amounts of power in the narrative, let alone exist as autonomous individuals without straining credulity to the breaking point, is the exact polar opposite of historically accurate writing.

Which leads me back to the issue of prejudice: specifically, to the claim that including such characters in SFF stories, by dint of contradicting the model of straight, white, male homogeneity laid down by Tolkien and taken as gospel ever since, is an inherently political – and therefore suspect – act. To which I say: what on Earth makes you think that the classic SWM default is apolitical? If it can reasonably argued that a character’s gender, race and sexual orientation have political implications, then why should that verdict only apply to characters who differ from both yourself and your expectations? Isn’t the assertion that straight white men are narratively neutral itself a political statement, one which seeks to marginalise as exceptional or abnormal the experiences of every other possible type of person on the planet despite the fact that straight white men are themselves a global minority? And even if a particular character was deliberately written to make a political point, why should that threaten you? Why should it matter that people with different beliefs and backgrounds are using fiction to write inspirational wish-fulfillment characters for themselves, but from whose struggle and empowerment you feel personally estranged? That’s not bad writing, and as we’ve established by now, it’s certainly not bad history – and particularly not when you remember (as so many people seem to forget) that fictional cultures are under no obligation whatsoever to conform to historical mores. It just means that someone has managed to write a successful story that doesn’t consider you to be its primary audience – and if the prospect of not being wholly, overwhelmingly catered to is something you find disturbing, threatening, wrong? Then yeah: I’m going to call you a bigot, and I probably won’t be wrong.

Point being, I’m sick to death of historical accuracy being trotted out as the excuse du jour whenever someone freaks out about the inclusion of a particular type of character in SFF, because the ultimate insincerity behind the claim is so palpable it’s practically a food group. I’m yet to see someone who objects to the supposed historic inaccuracy of, for instance, female cavalry regiments (which – surprise! - is totally a thing) raise similarly vehement objections to any other aspect of historically suspicious worldbuilding, like longbows in the wrong period or medical knowledge being too far advanced for the setting. The reason for this is, I suspect, simple: that most people with sufficient historical knowledge to pick up on issues like nonsensical farming techniques, the anachronistic presence of magnets in ancient settings and corsetry in the wrong era also know about historical diversity, and therefore don’t find its inclusion confronting. Almost uniformly, in fact, it seems as though such complaints of racial and sexual inaccuracy have nothing whatsoever to do with history and everything to do with a foggy, bastardised and ultimately inaccurate species of faux-knowledge gleaned primarily – if not exclusively – from homogeneous SFF, RPG settings, TV shows and Hollywood. And if that’s so, then no historic sensibilities are actually being affronted, because none genuinely exist: instead, it’s just a reflexive way of expressing either conscious or subconscious outrage that someone who isn’t white, straight and/or male is being given the spotlight.

Because ultimately, these are SFF stories: narratives set in realms that don’t and can’t exist. And if you still want to police the prospects of their inhabitants in line with a single, misguided view of both human history and human possibility, then congratulations: you have officially missed the point of inventing new worlds to begin with.

Brilliant!

#Diversity #racebending #unsolicited writing advice

Q
Hi, I'm a writer and I'm currently writing a book. My main character is of Asian descent although I never mention his race in the majority of the book, or the races of my other characters (of the 4 of them, only one of them is white). Is this wrong to do? The reason I did it was to catch people out near the end when they're like "shit, I presumed everyone was white". Should I show their races from the beginning or leave it the way it is? Thank you in advance.
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It sounds gimmicky…   (*tada!*  Miyuki was Asian all along!)

(And difficult to pull off.  It seems that no matter how obvious you try, some readers will just never acknowledge that not all characters are white.  It might be helpful to note it of the character sooner rather than later.

When readers (who weren’t paying attention) found out that Rue from The Hunger Games was black or that Magnus from Cassandra Clare’s books was Asian, they didn’t become introspective—they complained and spewed racism and  slurs.)

#unsolicited writing advice

Q
So, I'm trying to write a book and one of the characters are Asian,and I wondered if it would seem like I was "othering" this character by giving a description like angled eyes and having their last name be mentioned, such as Wu?
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I would not recommend using the description “angled eyes” unless every white character’s eye angle will be described as well….especially since not all Asians have angled eyes.      Mentioning the last name might be helpful.  Your mileage may vary.    More info on this topic is in this tag:

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#unsolicited writing advice

Casual reminder that Lena Dunham thinks writing a black woman would be too much of a stretch b/c of dif life experiences… while Kerry Washington is standing right there.

suzukibeane:

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tyndalecode:

Fab black prep school ladies represent. 

I tend to fall in the “don’t try to typecast diversity because it just makes it awkward for all of us and the problem is structural and therefore not necessarily the artist’s responsibility” camp. But it’s true, Lena could at least try—Black nerds, multiracial hipsters. But she probably would fail, or people would say that she failed, and she has a pretty remarkable winning streak (I know it’s due to her privilege, but also her talent). 

The topic of the night is Girls and Lena Dunham and some of the crappy stuff she and her writing staff have said about the lack of diversity on her show

But the “don’t try to typecast diversity” comment comes up a lot.  For example, I’ve seen it come up in conversations about adding diversity toStar Wars.  There’s usually feigned concerns about how it would feel “like too much of a political agenda” or “too forced” and fear that the inclusion of more characters of color would be “unrealistic.”  

(The idea that having an all-white male cast in a galaxy far far away, or the fact that having an all-white woman cast in NYC could be actually more of “an agenda” or “forced” or “unrealistic” falls away.)

We have to stop relying on the “but it could be awkward if we add diversity” excuse and start critically examining the “it is awkward when there is no diversity” reality.

If you identify as a writer and if you write professionally, then it is your job to continually develop your craft.  Part of that includes learning new skills.  If you are not born with the innate talent to know how to write diverse characters (who is?) then perhaps it is part of your responsibility to grow as a writer and practice and observe and learn and seek out different perspectives.  This allows you to grow your craft.  It should also help you better understand “the human condition” and what makes any of your characters and writing relatable to others.  

Yes, there is a reasonable fear that in writing characters with different experiences than yours, different cultures than yours, etc. you could royally mess it up.  That is a risk you take when you write a character with life experiences outside of  your scope of experience, and why good authors do research and consult and read.  Don’t know how to write a soldier on the front lines of war?   Read the books and essays written by soldiers who have experienced it.  Find people who are interested in collaborating with you who have had those experiences.  If you find a character or story that you are not in a position to tell (eg. this is a community of people whose voices are regularly appropriated by others) then by all means, don’t write over their stories…step sideways and uncrowd and amplify those voices.

This means that if you are worried that your writing will be “typecast” or “stereotypical” or “tokenizing” then you need to take a close, hard look as to why.  AND, if you happen to be an award-winning showrunner and screenwriter with a television show and a writers budget, it means you have the resources to seek out collaborators whom you can work with to create realistic representations.

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how to make your alternate medieval fantasy story both original and not shitty

khaleesi:

As a fantasy writer, I am RIDIC tired of reading the same goddamn story over and over and over again. It’s all basically Lord of the Rings, but with different names and different territories. (I’m dead serious about that. Whole books have been written about how LOTR changed fantasy as a genre forever, and while I get that, let’s stop rewriting it, ok?)
What I’m not talking about here is historical fiction. That’s another thing entirely. Alternate medieval fantasy (also known as high fantasy or epic fantasy) takes place in a recognizable world that is somehow reminiscent of the medieval period in our own history. There are roughly eight billion examples of this, including but not limited to: A Song of Ice and Fire, The Lord of the Rings, The Farseer Trilogy, Kristen Cashore’s books, pretty much anything about King Arthur, etc.
Most high fantasy has tropes. These tropes are fucking old. We can do better.
  • Stop making everyone white. Guys I am so fucking serious, all this does is show that you know fuck-all about history and how many people of color were doing a m a z i n g shit in the medieval period. Also? You are MAKING THIS WORLD UP. It is NOT ACTUALLY BASED ON EUROPEAN HISTORICAL FACT ANYWAY. The hell is everyone white for? (There’s a much larger conversation to be had here about most people who write high fantasy having no idea that the European world they’re loosely envisioning as they write has nothing to do with the historical reality, but that’s another post).
  • Don’t make it about white people vs. non-white people. If your white hero is going up against savages from the desert-lands, you’re fucking up.
  • Yo, for serious, no one cares about your reluctant noble bastard-born son of the king. Every other alternate medieval fantasy story has a reluctant noble bastard-born son of the king out saving the world. I just yawned writing that sentence. Do something else. There are literally BILLIONS of different characters you can come up with as a writer, come on.
  • People didn’t just start becoming queer in the 20th century in this universe. People have been queer basically forever, in a lot of the world. No1curr about your book full of straight people. Totally over it.
  • If your protagonist is a lady, her entire story shouldn’t be about saving the kingdom and also suddenly finding LOVE. Love is a many splendored thing, love lifts us up where we belong, but I promise you can write a story where a woman falls in love that isn’t about the woman falling in love (with the only man who never doubted her!)

Avoid these hideous tropes and remember: YOU ARE MAKING UP THIS WORLD. Why should it be bound by the same bigoted bullshit we run into in our world all the damn time?

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Q
You've said the best way for whites to avoid unintentionally writing bad fiction about people of colour is to talk to people of that group. But we've all heard justifications like "We ran it by so-and-so, and they were okay with it." How can a creator be sure the opinions they get are representative of a race or culture?
A

I don’t think there is any way to be sure.  It is difficult for any one person to speak for any race or culture, even if it is their own.  It’s more important to get a diversity of opinions from that culture, I think, and really examine “good” and “bad” depictions of it.

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In response to the post about the person writing about Pasifika

Romanticism has done as much harm to the indigenous world as every other part of colonialism ever has, because it rewrites identity. Maori consequently take appropriation pretty seriously. Due to this Lego switched up their Bionicle range ten years ago and since then indigenous intellectual property rights have gained much more recognition than they had at that point in time.

Furthermore, the submitter’s desire to educate the wider (and presumably western) world on the fascinating cultures of the Pacific kind of totally ignores the way knowledge (especially the branches they would be using for a fantasy) is handled in Polynesian cultures themselves — which is sort of indicative of a coloniser’s inherently ethnocentric take on them, in itself.

I’m not saying that the project can’t be done, but its author would do well to get out of whatever armchair s/he sits in, somewhere else in the world, and actually know the people they have this desire to speak for.

Sincerely,

A Maori.

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